Project: Vigilante
Stephanie Mina for Monochrome a.k.a. Beth
Significant character
Vocal Profile: soprano to mezzo-soprano range; upbeat, some profanity and slang in her speech; British accent preferred but not mandatory (don't let the accent put you off, I encourage you to try regardless!)
Character Profile: aged 17/18; serves as field agent and sniper for the team of misfits; street-smart and level-headed with a passion for games; she's always willing to help the protagonist, even if it gets messy, but she also knows where to draw boundaries
Feel free to take creative liberties with the lines!
- english
- female teen
- female young adult
[excitement] Guess what? They're making a movie! I can watch an entire hour of Carmilla, and yes, you're joining me!
[anger] This better be the last time I pull you out of a stunt like this! What were you—were you even thinking?!
[monologue] If you're looking for someone to complete something random, you've come to the right place! Don't worry about the paperwork, all you need to know is—wait. Is that Zelda merch? You're a fan too?! Don't quote me on this but I heard Nintendo are working on something new that they're releasing in a few years! We'll talk games later though, I've got work to do right? I'm Beth by the way, how can we be of service?
Your expression of emotion is amazing, even with the accent, well done! The pacing felt a little too fast in the monologue however and I notice your voice got softer in the monologue too (or perhaps you were trying to be quiet) which made your emotive tones sound weaker. Even so, your inflections and emphasis placement were maintained well, you're free to try the lines again if you'd like. Thank you for the audition!
Thank you very much for the criticism! I would very much like to try again with your notes. I believe I was quiet with the monologue because I imagined her excitedly whispering a rumor (as I am also a HUGE Zelda fan), but I see what you mean. Again, thank you for taking the time to give me feedback, it's very much appreciated!
Awww I see, I had a feeling you might have been going for that but this character is definitely loud when she's excited haha. The deadline will be mid-October so you've got under two weeks, I look forward to your resubmission!