Project: Vigilante
Zach T. for Detective Oliver Finnian
Vocal Profile: baritone to bass range; authoritative, formal and sometimes uses profanity; no preference for accent, feel free to experiment
Character Profile: aged 27/28; his recent promotion to Detective can be accredited to his obsession with his work; used to know and respect the previous King of Spades when he was a constable but he does not agree with breaking the law; his jokes are terrifying
Feel free to take creative liberties with the lines!
- english
- male adult
[humourous] A holiday? Bold of you to assume I'd authorise leave when we have a menace playing town hero. At ease, Constable, I'm joking.
[furious] Have we still not tracked down who these anonymous notes are coming from?! What is our budget being wasted on?!
[monologue] I'm Detective Finnian, you wanted to see me? A lead on the vigilante? My men and I have been looking for months and you mean to tell me you came across this only yesterday? If you're pulling my leg, you had better think twice, I'm currently not in the mood. I see. In that case I will look into it, thank you for your time. [sighs] Sorry, I've no time for an interview, I don't sleep as it is, the last thing I need is the media on my back too.
Your emphasis placement and inflections here are definitely better, and again you maintain good pacing. Your emotive tones in the monologue are still a little weak but you carried a good formal and tired tone for the character's speech. The second line is again your strongest, your expression of anger/annoyance seems to come the most natural to you, although the first line was a very close second. This was interesting to listen to with your voice type, thank you for auditioning!
Totally, man. Thank you for the constructive advice!