Project: Vigilante
Zach T. for Jack of Spades Pierce
Vocal Profile: baritone to bass range; moody, plenty of slang, obscenity, vulgarity, profanity you name it; no preference for accents, feel free to experiment
Character Profile: aged 22/23; recently appointed Jack of Spades by Rai for whom he has deep respect; strangely insecure about his place in The Spades so will often go out of his way to ensure none question their strength; a competent brawny school dropout.
Feel free to take creative liberties with the lines!
- english
- male adult
- male young adult
[thoughtful] The Spades...are my home. It's my job to make sure everything remains in order, because no one wants a dumpster of a home.
[annoyed] You know, there's a word for people like you. It's [insert a string of profanities]. Yeah, one word, look it up.
[monologue] I'm the Jack of Spades, I'm here because I serve a purpose. I make sure those Diamond idiots don't get too cocky and keep things in check when Alvah's too busy baby sitting that pest or Rai is out on actual jobs. Why are you here? Don't tell me trash-talking is all you're good at. [sigh] Grab a bat, we're going to learn some basics. And for future reference, if I catch your ugly face trash talking Raijun or The Spades, expect a knife through your neck.
I like the type of voice you have, I envision this kind of voice for this character! However, a few of your inflections and choice of emphasis placement makes your read of the lines sound a little unnatural (one example is emphasising "are" in the first line where "home" would have been a better choice). This effects your emotive tones and makes them sound weaker, although your emotion in the second line came out the best of the three, so you certainly have potential! One thing you maintained well through your audition is your pacing, well done! I appreciate the audition, thank you!
Thanks man! I appreciate your words and the input!