no need to edit the story all I ask is for someone to read the novel in chapters and give a detailed review of your thoughts and options. The following are suggestions on the type of questions I would like answered:

1. what did you like/dislike?
2. what would you change?
3. something that stood out to you at all?  

you have a two-week timeframe but if you require more time I can provide it for you. Please audition by telling me something about yourself and why you think you are qualified