Hi! I hope you don't mind me giving you a little auditioning advice for here? I noticed you introduced yourself at the beginning of your audition (Hi, my name is [insert name] etc.) That is typically called a Slate, and generally isn't done here on Casting Call unless the project manager asks for it.

Two, I also noticed that you read only one of the audition lines. Typically these are set up so that for an audition, you read all three lines in whatever format the project manager wants them in. (example: Project description asks for AABBCC format, which would mean you read the first line twice. the second line twice, the third line twice. Usually done with different emotion each read.)

Also I did notice you kept going out of character throughout your audition, ("this is the third voice" etc) Also typically frowned upon, Most auditions are done so that you stay in character for the entire audition. (by this, I mean just reading the audition lines. You can put stuff in your audition description like "each take has a different voice" or something like that.)

Finally, I noticed it sounded like you were recording a video for your audition. On Casting Call Club, all voice actor auditions are made into MP3 files, so there's no video feed. There are a few positions where you would have to post a link to a video, like normal actor, music maker, etc.

Again I hope you don't mind the friendly advice (I just realized I typed wayyy too much. whoops.) I just noticed you were looking for feedback and I wanted to share a few tips on how this site works. Good luck with future auditions! :D