Avengers Chapter 2
Edgic The Hedgic for Eddie Brock/Venom
Edwin, or Eddie Brock, is the main character of a fanfic series called "Venom Evolution" that takes place in a Semi-reversal world where good are bad and bad are good.
He is also one of the main Avengers.
Unlike many incarnations where Venom kills and is a hulking monster, he is scrawny as spider-man and he does not wish to kill criminals nor eat them, and is a teenager.
One time he got stuck thanks to "Pete The Pounder" when a symbiote came and helped him out the night it arrived on Earth. Since then, he uses the symbiote to do good for New York City.
Despite the good looks he gained from the symbiote improving his body and a little bit of sadism of scaring the criminals, he is nerd.
When he has the symbiote and "mask" his voice turns monstrous.
- male teen
- Superhero
- Monster
- Nerd
- awkward
- superhero
- teen
- monster
As Eddie: Don’t worry. I might look different, but deep down; I’m still that little nerd. | (Awkward chuckle) Eh...hehehe... I don't know. My bud Sim's a bit familiar with where he came from though I think.
As Venom: Did your Moms teach you any manners? (Beat) Guess not. | (Singing Creepily like picard singing in star trek 9) Come out Come out Whereever you arrrrrre... | (A bit freaked out) Well, on the bright side at least we don't have to worry about a ticking time bomb from that lizard...... I GUESS!!!
I see you're using a deep voice, but I'm not really looking for that.
Now, the venom voice sounds nice, admittedly I do think it maybe could be a bit toned down. And that last line at the end is close to what I'm looking for, which is the monstrous voice having some emotion. Previous submissions gave the venom voice practically ZERO emotion, so that's a VAST IMPROVEMENT.
It's not a bad submission, I can hear and see it especially backed up with a few of your previous submissions, it just needs to be some tweaking.
With that said, I do have one or two people that's gonna auditioning for the role at some point later, so I'm gonna be comparing and hear which one can do it justice.
I'll get back to you on that later on, but until then please have a good day or night, take care, and keep on doing good VA and improving. :)
I wanted to go for a twist of Tom Hardy's Eddie, but felt like doing a cheap twist of my own, but at least I tried. I mainly take inspiration from both Tom Hardy and Tony Todd as my basis for Venom, but nonetheless, I appreciate the feedback.