Awesome job, that was super fun to listen to!

You had great energy throughout the script! I would like you to work on slowing down a little bit, especially where there are a lot of words with the same starting sounds. An example would be places where there are a lot of “s” sounds. They can often start jumbling into each other, especially if one word ends with “s” and the next word starts with “s”. It is important for the audience to be able to distinguish the individual words. Practice with some tongue twisters to get the feel of enunciating while also maintaining an energetic tone for scripts like this. Overall, it was a fun read!