Great read! Love the add-ins.

You did a great job with the character and energy! I am only hearing the audio from one side of my headphones, so you might want to check your recording settings. There were a few moments of high energy where I noticed your words were jumbling into each other a bit. With higher energy you still want to be able to be understood by your audience. Slowing down a bit or practicing those lines where you are jumbling words will help you nail them. Enunciation is very important so your audience will be able to understand the message you are conveying to them. Practice with those tongue twisters to help you work on keeping that energy while also enunciating. Overall it was an entertaining read!