Just checked out your submission! I could totally picture you in a stadium moderating a game! You have great bass in you voice BTW!

You had great enunciation on your words! Now that you have your words enunciated, you can work on making it sound more natural by not emphasizing each word as much. When emphasizing each individual word it disrupts the flow of natural dialogue. Try putting yourself in the scenario of the script. In this case, you may be in a stadium and watching each play as it happens. You can keep the audience interested and enthusiastic if you change up the volume in which you speak. With high energy we are tempted to be consistently loud, but speaking a lower volume at different parts of the script can add a sense of suspense for the listener. When the audience hears those changes it will capture their attention and make them feel part of the game. Great job overall!