Nice projection Jo, great pace and emotion!

You did a nice job enunciating throughout the script! There were some words that got blended together, but it's pretty natural since we dont really think about that stuff when speaking for real, so just listen back to your audio and you'll be able to catch which words need to be more clear. To add some variation to your read try changing the volume, pacing, inflection of your voice. You kept a similar pace and volume throughout. Giving a more dynamic read will keep your audience interested in what you are saying. With a script that has a lot of energy, you can still try to change your volume to add some intrigue. A louder volume is usually for high energy and excitement, so try to utilize that when you are conveying those emotions to your audience. You did a great job!