Nice job Josh!

I liked your energy you brought to the script! You had good moments of tone and emotion variation. I would like you to slow down just a tad bit to make sure you are enunciating all of your words. The “s” sound can get tricky, so when you approach a string of words that start with “s” I want you to take your time enunciating each of the words. A way you can enhance your reads as well is to change up the volume of your voice. Changing the volume to a softer tone for some moments during an energetic script can add suspense to the audience, then adding a louder volume for really high energy parts of the script. Overall, you did a good job!