Great projection and clarity, only thing for me was a times it felt just a tad too quick... Nicely done overall!

I really liked the energy you had throughout the script! I would like you to slow down a bit and take slightly longer pauses between the sentences. It is a fun and exciting script, but taking the slight pauses between sentences will give the audience time to react to what you just said before moving onto the next sentence. Pausing will also give you an opportunity to catch your breath to make sure your sentences can start and end with the required amount of volume and energy. You don’t want the end of your sentence to fade out due to being out of breath. Also think about changing up your pacing and tone in certain spots to give the audience variation when listening. Keeping the same exact energy throughout might cause the audience to have an overabundance of energy hit all at once, so giving them those slight breaks can help. Great work!