Great, fun energy in this! Very well done!

Awesome Energy! Well done

Nice energy and projection here! There were some parts where your words started blending together like in “What a play”, sounding like “wadda play” so just continue working on your tongue twisters. What you can do to enhance your performance even more is to continue playing around with your pacing, volume, pauses, emphasis, etc. For example, break apart your script and think about what spots you can maybe speak faster to enhance the energy or where you can speak slower to tone down the energy while keeping the clarity in your words. Pauses can give dramatic effects and moments for the audience to ponder. Emphasis can make certain moments important. Think about taking your audience on a roller coaster in a sense. Giving them something and taking it away can keep them really drawn in and excited to see and hear what happens next. Overall, well done!