Good job!

This was awesome! I think your energy and pacing were great for this and it felt like I was listening to a real broadcast. My only critique would be during the sponsorship bit, your voice got a little low - but the execution was great!

Nice job bringing some flavor and fun throughout the performance! I like the changes in your cadence and inflections so that you have some variance going on. I’d really like for you to project your voice a bit more and get more air into your lungs. This will help give you even more energy and power to play with. Think about the scenario you’re in. If we’re talking about being on tv, especially having younger viewers, your performance has to be big and exciting as if you’re the biggest fan of them all. You want your audience to feel like they are at the game as well, feeling that huge energy. Kids tend to get bored faster so you always have to be doing something to keep them drawn in. The part where you say “Sorry what’s that?” was very well done. It felt natural and real as if someone really did interrupt you.