Good job Howard! Little work on some pacing, you got this!

I like your energy when you start saying the plays - I agree with the previous comment though on the pacing, overall great work!

Make sure that you are not going too fast in your pacing in the beginning. There were some moments where your words were hard to understand, but if you slow down just a hair you’ll have more time to really articulate your words to avoid them blending together. Play around with your cadence so that you don’t stick with the same tone. Your voice tends to stay in the same pitch most of the time. Think about your audience and play into them! If we think of commentators in sports, they really project their voice and have a ton of energy just like the crowd would. Don’t be afraid to go over the top and big! Don't forget to add a tongue twister too next time! Good job!