Great job on your performance! Your pacing is good, but consider slowing down a bit to ensure your articulation is as clear as possible. Some words tended to blend together, so taking your time will help with clarity.

You handled mistakes well, moving on from them and not letting them affect your performance, which is fantastic. Remember, if you stumble, it's okay to pause, reset, and start from the beginning of the sentence if needed.

Right now, focusing on your projection is key. Your voice is a bit quiet, and it doesn't quite convey the energy of being in a gym full of people. Try taking a deeper breath and using your diaphragm to project your voice more effectively. This will help you sound more present and engaging. Keep up the great work and continue to refine your delivery!