woah thats super fast! i think slowing down would help a lot!

Not bad on this read! However, let's focus on slowing down a bit to ensure your articulation is clear. Your current pace is a bit quick, which causes some words to blend together, making them hard to understand. Remember, your audience doesn't have a script to follow, so they only get one chance to hear you clearly. Taking your time is crucial; it's not a race.

Also, having more air in your lungs will help with projection, articulation, and pacing. If you’re running out of breath frequently, it’s important to work on your breath support and control. Try to avoid those large, noticeable breaths and aim for smoother transitions. Keep practicing your vocal exercises to enhance your breath control and overall performance. Great job overall!