You did a great job overall, but I’d suggest slowing down just a bit and focusing on projecting your voice more. Taking deeper breaths and using more air will really help with your projection, making sure you’re heard clearly even in a large space like a gymnasium. It will also improve your articulation and pacing, so you’re not rushing through the script.

Additionally, try to add more variance to your tone throughout the read. This will help bring more personality to your performance and make it more engaging for the audience. Having fun with different emotional nuances and inflections can really make your read stand out. Keep up the good work and continue experimenting with these adjustments!