I really liked how you varied your inflections throughout the performance. It added a nice dimension and kept the delivery engaging. To further enhance your read, consider increasing your pacing just a bit. Right now, some parts feel a bit dragged out, which can cause the audience to lose interest as they wait for the next part. By speeding up slightly, you can keep the momentum going and maintain the audience’s attention.

For articulation, focus on pronouncing each word fully from start to finish. Sometimes, the ends of your words can blend into the next word, making them harder to understand. Ensuring that each word is articulated clearly will help with overall clarity and comprehension.

Overall, great job! Keep working on these adjustments to make your performance even stronger.