Nice energy and articulation!

I can hear you projecting really well, which is awesome! Your energy and enthusiasm are evident and add a lot to the performance. However, I did notice a pattern where one phrase ends with an upward inflection and the next with a downward inflection, creating a repetitive up-and-down effect. Try to vary your inflection patterns a bit more to keep the delivery dynamic and engaging.

Also, remember to focus on articulation, as there were a few moments where certain words became a bit difficult to understand. Keeping your enunciation clear will help ensure that your audience can follow along without any confusion. Great job overall, and keep up the good work with that positive energy!