Doing great here, the only thing I see based off our first class. Would be to slow down the reading a tad. Good work!

I really enjoyed the variety in your cadence—it brought a fun, engaging energy to your performance! It’s clear you’re putting in the effort to make the read lively and interesting. One thing to work on is managing your breath more effectively. I noticed a few instances where you seemed to lose breath towards the end of words and sentences. Taking in more air will help with both your breath control and projection. Make sure to use your diaphragm to push out the words clearly and with more volume. Regular breathing exercises can be really beneficial for this.

Additionally, there were a few moments where articulation could be improved. Ensuring each part of the word is pronounced clearly from start to finish will enhance the overall clarity of your performance. Keep focusing on these areas, and with continued practice, you’ll see great improvements. Nice job overall, and keep up the good work!