Great job! Nice steady pace

Great job on your performance! At the beginning, I’d love to hear even more projection. While your projection improved as you went along, pushing your voice out further from the start would really set a strong tone for the read. Just a reminder to manage your mic placement or adjust your gain to avoid peaking in your audio, which can help maintain a clear and professional sound.

As you progress, keep focusing on how you project your voice while adding some fun and unique variations to your read. This not only enhances your performance but also helps you stand out in a competitive audition setting. Balancing strong projection with dynamic acting choices will help you deliver a captivating and memorable performance. Overall, you did an excellent job, and with continued attention to these elements, you'll keep improving and making a strong impression!