Nice work, only feedback here would be the reverb from the room. Not much you can do on this unless, you can get some of those foam padding like Burger mentioned in class. Nice pace!

You did a good job with your read, but to make it even more engaging, try varying your approach with each sentence and phrase. Sticking to the same pattern can make the read feel repetitive, so experiment with different cadences, emphases, and pacing. This will help keep the audience's interest and make your performance more dynamic.

I noticed a few moments where you took longer pauses or dragged out words, like in “No cash, no problem. No kidding.” While it’s great that you’re focusing on articulation, be cautious about slowing down too much. It’s important to maintain a rhythm that keeps the audience engaged without losing their attention. Keep practicing, and you'll see improvements in pacing and overall delivery. Great effort, and just keep refining those skills!