Well done! Like the little French on entree :) Only thing I can see is sometime, it might be to soft for everyone in the gym to hear. But you did great!

I really liked your cadence and the way you varied your tone throughout; it gave your read a nice rhythm and kept things engaging. However, we need a bit more projection in your delivery to really make it shine. Imagine you’re speaking to someone across a large gymnasium—your chest and diaphragm should engage fully to push your words out with the power needed for such a setting. Don’t be afraid to raise your volume, but remember, there’s no need to scream; just project with confidence.

The accent you put on “entree fee” was a charming touch that added a lot of personality to your read and made me smile. Adding these unique, character-driven elements can really make your performance stand out. Overall, great job! With a bit more focus on projection and continued attention to those personal touches, you’ll make your performance even more impactful. Keep up the excellent work!