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Nicely done, but I would agree with Ralph. If you could slow down the pace a tad, you will do well!

You did a fantastic job with clarity in your words! Your articulation was strong in many areas, although there were a few moments where it could be even sharper. This will naturally improve with continued practice. One area that could use some focus is your breathing. By taking in more air before you start speaking, you can avoid rushing through your lines and enhance your pacing. This extra breath support will also help with projection, allowing your voice to reach every corner of the room without straining.

So let's talk about speed, your pacing was a bit quick, and this, combined with some issues with projection, might be due to not having enough breath support. Work on engaging your diaphragm and taking deep breaths. This will give you a more robust push, helping you maintain a steady pace and deliver your lines with greater impact. Additionally, having more air will allow you to experiment more with the script, adding your unique touch and nuances to your performance. Keep practicing these breathing exercises and continue honing your technique. With time, you'll find even greater control and confidence in your reads. Great job overall, and keep up the hard work!