Great emotion in the reading. Only thing I can hear is, sometimes you went too fast on the reading, great clear reading though! Nicely done

I really appreciate the tone and pacing you’ve established in this read—it’s engaging and sets a solid foundation for your performance. However, projecting your voice is crucial, especially in a setting like a gymnasium where you need to be heard clearly across a large space. Imagine speaking to someone across the room without any amplification; you’d need to project your voice effectively to ensure they hear you.

Try to focus on using your diaphragm to push out your words with more power. This technique not only helps with projection but also maintains clarity, reducing the risk of slurring words together. For instance, phrases like “no risk, no obligation” need to be pronounced clearly, so taking a moment to breathe deeply and project will help keep each word distinct.

Keep working on these elements, and don’t be afraid to adjust your breath and projection as needed. You’re doing great, and with a bit more focus on projection, your read will become even more impactful. Keep up the hard work!