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SepiaAnt8071 for Michael
Michael is a kind character, and he wants to help out and get to know people. He is a part of the neighborhood service community. He wants to get to know Akira, but Akira has mixed feelings.
"So, you areeeeee new around here. Aren't cha?"
"Look, I didn't come up here and talk to you just to cause a fight."
"I was going to offer to help out moving in, but it seems you're just a little occupied.
You did really good, you seemed to get trapped in words but I don't blame you. I worded things really weird for all lines and so, it's a little hard. Something that could be improved is your microphone, it seems your microphone caught your breathing, or you might've hit it.
So I need to send in a new audition?
Yes please, your voice is really fit for the character so I'd like to see a second try with more improvements.
Just to make sure about something: what are the specifics of the redo? I know that you wanted improvements, but to me that means re-edit the raw recording then clip out the parts with the breathing/tongue-tied parts. I can probably get this done later on today. School and busy life aspects come first.
Of course. I'm sorry I didn't specify. What I think you could quickly do, and by the way I'll be editing clips so don't worry about that. -But I think you could add some more emotions, I felt when you re-said the lines you didn't really change how it was said so you could definitely explore more ways.
Hmmm well I know I read that he was a friendly person, and well my normal voice is similar my "happy" voice. So when I read friendly that's what I was going for.
I actually re-listened to your casting call and I see what you are going for, it's pretty good. I think I was really looking for a whole another way to say it, so I was not focused on how you did it. I like your friendly tone. Just private message me your discord or if you need to make one private message it after.