The Purgatorians | Original and Ambitious 5 season audio drama
KellySaidThat for Raven Gosse
Current Plot line - She is acting as a double agent for the Purgatorians and Abraham.
Main character until the season 5 Christmas special
Raven is sarcastic and condescending to all but Abraham and Demetrius. She believes herself to be above everyone else in the group. She can manipulate people to do things her way quite easily. I would like her to have sharp wit and condescending tones like Morrigan in Dragon Age
Raven would see humour as a weakness and would not chuckle unless she found something absolutely ridiculous or was embarrassed, such as when she thinks she is getting flattered as she is not used to such things happening. Keep her sarcasm on show as well as her bluntness, she always cuts straight to the point.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sZQP1Jjc1og
- english
- female adult
- 25-35
(Friendly) I am not sure whether he knows that or not, it was never mentioned however we both know Abraham likes to hold his cards close to his chest, especially where the council is concerned. He may know more than he is letting on however I will act as a double agent, acting on behalf of both you and my uncle.
(Condescending, mocking) Oh, I underestimated you. You can try my dear but you will never be able to see the real me, I will continue to amaze and surprise you throughout our journey. Everytime you think you have figured me out, something will happen that will blow your theory into the tiniest pieces. I would not even bother trying.
(Condescending, mocking) I speak to him as his superior whereas you all stumble upon your words. You show him you hold no confidence and he will not see this as a true formation until you do. You remember what you said to me outside the church Jamie? How official you sounded? This needs to be applied to all those who try to undermine your authority. When we tried to gain access to the barracks you acted like a little puppy who had just urinated in his masters shoes.
Line 1 - Great. I didn't see a problem with it.
Line 2 - Loved it but drop the inflection on 'pieces' near the end. This will make it sound more sarcastic rather than it sounding as joking with them as it does now.
line 3 - Very good but 'urinated' is still not quite right. that could easily be solved using directors chat in Discord though.
You are a very talented voice actor with nice, clear audio and voice. She does need to sound more sarcastic and possibly a little condescending as Morrigan is, as parts of this seemed much more friendly, but this was a fantastic audition.
Thank you, since I was too harsh the first time I wanted to show you I could pull it back. Landing in the middle won't be hard at all. I love directed sessions, we always have fun while getting that work done.
Taking direction is a point of pride for me, as well as being easy to work with, flexible and always a professional. I own my home, in a quiet neighborhood, with a permanent studio and booth. My mortgage payin' job is also at home, so I can schedule booth time whenever. I feel that you are in the GMT time zone, and I work with a lot of people from London so figuring that out is pretty easy.
I've worked in various pharmacy applications, from retail, to oncology, to auditing (what I do now). My best friend had the same thing you are going to get on Monday. It will be very, very helpful in determining exactly what is going on, and the best way to treat it. Please take it easy.
This is an awesome project, thank you for the opportunity to audition, and for the feedback!
As long as she has Morrigan's attitude, both sarcastic and condescending, yet not too much that she comes off as rude and arrogant, and not too little that it sounds like she wants to be best friends with the team either. She is a double agent remember.
Yes, I am in the GMT time zone, take note it is BST right now though.
I am always impressed by those willing to follow direction. I have had some good auditions that I offered feedback for improvement on but they ignored it. They could have been good in the role but not willing to improve. I see these as would be nightmares to get retakes from if needed.
The doctor did say not to get too stressed or too excited so I am trying to temper my emotions until this is finally sorted. Mind you, if I woke up to 10 million subscribers tomorrow, the excitement would probably be the end of me lol.
Thank you for wanting to be a part of it. Everyone who auditions are just as valuable to the show as those who are cast. After all if no-one auditioned, there would be no show. I am very thankful to all those that do give their time to audition.
Not sure if you wanted those lines again - let me know
Yes please. You have the voice, i just need to hear the tone.
I'm so sorry I just saw this, I'll get it to you now.