The Purgatorians | Original and Ambitious 5 season audio drama
KellySaidThat for Raven Gosse
Current Plot line - She is acting as a double agent for the Purgatorians and Abraham.
Main character until the season 5 Christmas special
Raven is sarcastic and condescending to all but Abraham and Demetrius. She believes herself to be above everyone else in the group. She can manipulate people to do things her way quite easily. I would like her to have sharp wit and condescending tones like Morrigan in Dragon Age
Raven would see humour as a weakness and would not chuckle unless she found something absolutely ridiculous or was embarrassed, such as when she thinks she is getting flattered as she is not used to such things happening. Keep her sarcasm on show as well as her bluntness, she always cuts straight to the point.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sZQP1Jjc1og
- english
- female adult
- 25-35
(Friendly) I am not sure whether he knows that or not, it was never mentioned however we both know Abraham likes to hold his cards close to his chest, especially where the council is concerned. He may know more than he is letting on however I will act as a double agent, acting on behalf of both you and my uncle.
(Condescending, mocking) Oh, I underestimated you. You can try my dear but you will never be able to see the real me, I will continue to amaze and surprise you throughout our journey. Everytime you think you have figured me out, something will happen that will blow your theory into the tiniest pieces. I would not even bother trying.
(Condescending, mocking) I speak to him as his superior whereas you all stumble upon your words. You show him you hold no confidence and he will not see this as a true formation until you do. You remember what you said to me outside the church Jamie? How official you sounded? This needs to be applied to all those who try to undermine your authority. When we tried to gain access to the barracks you acted like a little puppy who had just urinated in his masters shoes.
'...Sarcasm is my first language' lol.
I have huge ambitions for the show. At the moment it is up to 36 episodes per season, up from 24 and 28, but I have always wanted to do a long running show, a serial drama, so if it does well I am thinking of making it weekly, so 53 episodes per year with the Christmas special included.
Line 1 - Can you make her voice a bit softer? She sounds a little older her than I envision her. I would like her to have a smooth voice like Morrigan in the reference video.
Take 2 - This is a little closer to the smoother voice than take 1.
Line 2 - At the end it sounded as though you got bored of the line. Keep the sarcasm up for that last bit.
Take 2 - This seemed to end on a more threatening tone than a sarcastic one.
Line 3 - Needs a little more personality. The sarcasm is coming across more as disdain, or a dislike for the characters. When you say urinated go up and down in tone like this URInaTED to make it sound a little more sarcastic.
You are obviously a good voice actor but try to keep the character more like Morrigan with a softer voice. Keep the sarcasm when needed but try not sounding as though you dislike the others. She does not need much friendliness but moreso than hatred.
Gotcha! I'll get you a re-do tonight.
I will be going to sleep shortly but will take a look first thing in the morning.
The role is being recast. Would you like to retry for the role before the role is opened up again?