This was a nice take! I do think some parts could be slowed down a bit, but it was pretty natural-sounding overall.

As your reading it, the cadence at certain areas are great! When you're reading, it sounds like you can be on amusement park ride announcer. Think of it ike as they are explaining the rules. Also, the quality is good as well!

Keep up the good work!

The quiz also!1. __3__ Do you like the sound of your voice?

2.__3__ Can others hear your voice in a crowd?

3.__3__ Are you a heavy breather or do you get short winded when you speak? (I get really passionate and also don't exercise haha!)

4.1____ Do people ask you if your mom/dad is home on the phone? 

5.1____ Is your voice mistaken for the opposite sex?

6.__3__ Does your voice change throughout the day?

7.__3__ Is your voice raspy or harsh? (I can go in either direction)

8.____5 Are you easily misunderstood? (I talk too fast!)

9.1____ Do you have frequent colds that seem to settle in your throat? 

10.___4_ When you feel pressure does your voice tighten and go up in pitch?

11._2___ Do you have a nasal sounding voice? 

12.____5 Do others ask you to repeat yourself? (See above!)

13._2___ Are you constantly clearing your throat?

14.__3__ Is your voice weaker in the morning than at night? 

15.__3__ Do people hear you clearly when you walk into a room? (See above!)

16.__3__ Do other people find your voice pleasant to the ear? (No clue!) 

17.____5 Are you animated and interesting to talk to?

Your tempo and pacing are currently quite fast, which might make it difficult for the audience to follow along easily. Slowing down a bit will not only make your delivery easier to understand but also help in managing your breath control, preventing you from running out of air towards the end of your read. Including a more consistent smile in your performance can transform the tone, making it warmer and more welcoming, which is crucial for keeping the audience engaged.

While your pronunciation and enunciation are generally clear, there's a slight issue with slurring some words. Paying closer attention to articulating each word more distinctly can help resolve this. Additionally, your projection needs a boost, especially at points where it tends to drop. Ensuring your voice reaches all parts of the room is key in maintaining the effectiveness of your communication.

Overall, by adjusting your pace, enhancing your projection, and maintaining a warm smile throughout your delivery, you'll create a more pleasant and engaging listening experience for your audience. Good job!