Hey not bad for your first read! Your pronunciation throughout the read is clear and precise, which is excellent for ensuring that every word is understood. I noticed hints of a smile trying to emerge in your delivery—go ahead and let that smile fully show! Allowing your smile to come through will not only enhance the warmth of your tone but also make the overall delivery more engaging and pleasant for your listeners.

While your read is nicely soothing, your strong voice has the potential to project even more. A bit more projection would really make your voice fill the space, capturing and holding the audience's attention even better. Despite this, the cleanliness and clarity of your voice truly stand out, making your narration both professional and enjoyable to listen to.

Keep focusing on these strengths while also letting your smile shine more visibly in your speech. This balance between clarity, projection, and warmth will make your performances even more compelling and enjoyable for your audience.