In my opinion, your projection is great! Something about your voice seems very trustworthy. Though it does seem the monologue was a bit rushed, I wanted to hear more of your personality. Good Job!

You're making good strides in your delivery, but there are a few areas that could use some improvement. There is noticeable word slurring and occasional stuttering in your performance. To address this, it's crucial to thoroughly review and practice the script before pressing the record button. This preparation will help you smooth out any rough spots and deliver your lines more fluidly.

While your projection is nearly where it needs to be, it still requires a bit more power to ensure that your voice can be heard clearly at the back of a large venue, like a gymnasium. Push yourself to project even more, using your diaphragm to amplify your voice without shouting.

Adding a consistent smile to your delivery can also enhance the warmth and welcoming nature of your performance, making the audience feel more connected to you. Furthermore, take care to pace yourself as you read the script. There’s no need to rush—speaking too quickly can lead to those stumbles and might make your audience miss key points. Slowing down a bit will allow you to maintain better control over your breath, which in turn supports clearer and more precise pronunciation.

By focusing on these aspects—preparing more thoroughly, boosting your projection, smiling throughout, and pacing yourself carefully—you’ll find that your overall effectiveness and audience engagement will significantly improve.