From the sound of the audio, I think your voice is projected just the right amount, and the effect is more the microphone than anything. I will say you have times where you sound a little anxious, but you're definitely on your way to a great start.

Great job on the projection! It's clear you're putting a strong emphasis on pronunciation and enunciation, ensuring that not only can everyone hear you, but they can also understand what you're saying. However, remember the importance of maintaining a consistent smile throughout your delivery. While it appears occasionally, it's not as prevalent as it could be. A continual smile will add warmth to your voice and make the read more inviting and engaging.

Your breath control is quite good, but there's a noticeable pause during some of the longer sentences. Although it doesn’t seem like you're out of breath, continue to work on strengthening your breath support with exercises like the "doggy pants." This will help you handle longer stretches more smoothly.

Lastly, if you're experiencing issues with peaking, adjusting your gain before you start speaking will help manage the levels better, ensuring a clearer and more balanced sound. Keep up the good work, and with these minor adjustments, your performance will become even more polished and engaging.