You managed to keep up great articulation at such a fast speed! Very impressive. I liked the energy and momentum you put into it. Maybe you could consider emphasising certain parts with pauses and different inflexions of your voice. Great job!

Your projection is nearly spot-on, but it could use a slight boost to fully reach and engage your audience. Additionally, adding a smile to your voice could significantly enhance the warmth and interest of your delivery. Without it, the read might come across as somewhat disinterested, which could disconnect listeners. Your pronunciation and enunciation are generally well-executed, with just a few minor flubs. Continue to focus on clarity to maintain this strength in your delivery.

Your breath control is decent, and continuing your "doggy pants" exercises will further strengthen this aspect. Keep in mind that your pacing allows for more flexibility than you might be using—feel free to take your time with the script to ensure each word resonates and the pacing feels natural. This will not only improve the clarity of your delivery but also the overall impact of your performance. Overall, it’s a solid read, and with a few adjustments in projection, expression, and pacing, your future reads will be even better!