Great smile at the beginning of your read! It really sets a positive tone. To elevate your performance even further, try increasing the energy to match the enthusiasm of your smile. Your projection is solid, but there's room to push it a bit more to ensure your voice fills the space, reaching everyone clearly without needing to shout. There was a minor flub in the middle, but you handled it smoothly, continuing as if it hadn’t happened, which is exactly the right approach—it keeps the flow and doesn’t let small mistakes derail you.

I noticed you're trying to sound interested, but it could use a bit more conviction. Imagine you're discussing something you're genuinely passionate about; this mindset can help inject that extra 'oomph' into your delivery. Remember, you’re excited about these pencil sharpeners—think of them as the best in the world, and you’re the one who gets to tell everyone why they're so amazing. Let that excitement and belief in the product come through in your voice to make your enthusiasm contagious.