Great job on the projection! Your voice carries well, which is fundamental, but incorporating a smile could significantly enhance your delivery. Currently, the absence of a smile might make your tone come across as slightly pushy, affecting how the audience perceives your message. Your pronunciation and enunciation are commendable for their clarity and precision. However, your pacing needs some attention—you have a tendency to speed up too much as you get into the middle of your delivery. It’s good that you manage to slow down again, but striving for consistent pacing throughout could help maintain a steady flow and make it easier for your audience to stay engaged.

Also, there are parts of your read that feel a bit repetitive or too uniform. We've discussed in class how falling into a 'sing-songy' pattern can detract from the impact of your delivery. Try to introduce more variation in tone and rhythm to break up any monotony and keep the delivery interesting. This change can invigorate your performance, making it more dynamic and engaging. Overall, you're on the right track—just remember these tips to refine your skills further and deliver even more compelling performances.