Great projection of the voice, and stellar enunciation as well! I'm especially impressed with your speed control. I tend to speed up on certain scripts when I get excited, but you kept the reading at a comfortable pace. No criticisms on my end. Fantastic work, Toby!

Awesome work Toby. Very good quality and delivery.

Your read shows promise with its clear projection and tone. I do think you can project even more however, It's great that you're able to be heard distinctly and that your articulation is sharp, ensuring that every word is understood. Your delivery starts to show real potential after the initial moments, settling into a more natural rhythm, which is great. The next step is to bring that relaxed and fluid style to the very beginning of your reads as well. When we engage in everyday conversations with peers, co-workers, or friends, our speech naturally adapts, flows, and shifts, reflecting the context and our relationship with the listener. Applying this dynamic quality to your performances will not only make them more relatable but significantly more engaging as well.

Keep in mind who your audience is and what your message aims to convey. This awareness should shape your tone, pace, and overall delivery style, transforming your read into a true interaction rather than a simple presentation of facts. Aim to connect with your listeners as if you’re sharing a moment together; this approach will help you move beyond just being clear to being genuinely captivating.

Your technical skills, like projection and pronunciation, are already quite strong. Now, if you focus on adding the warmth and variability of normal conversation into your reads, you’ll see your performance enhance dramatically. This means not just delivering the script but embodying it, bringing it to life with the enthusiasm and engagement that comes from discussing something you’re truly passionate about. Continue to experiment with varying your tone and pacing to discover how to best convey authenticity and excitement from start to finish.