Session 1
Kent Nguyen for Role
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
If anyone wants to bounce ideas/feedback and be classmates/friends I’m open to it! We could help each other improve. Would be cool to have friends through this voice journey! Feel free to add me on Discord @ starpyyy
Sounds good! Great work on this.
Thank you, I wasn't confident in where to breathe and felt I could have done better with variety. I also feel like I lost sight of the projection focus of the assignment the later it got in the recording.
Great start to your read! It’s smooth and engaging, but I noticed a pattern in how you begin your sentences, which could use some variation. Just like in everyday conversations, where the tone and intensity naturally fluctuate, try applying that dynamic range to your voice acting to keep it lively and engaging. When you exclaimed "Come on in!", it felt a bit forced. Aim for a more gradual build-up to such energetic moments, which can feel more natural and less jarring to the listener.
Your delivery is friendly, which is fantastic, but it doesn't fully convey that you're deeply engaged with the content. Injecting more passion into your read could make a significant difference. Try to connect more deeply with the material as if it's something you're truly passionate about. This genuine interest can help sustain your energy, especially important as I noticed your energy dips towards the end. Consistently high energy throughout is crucial when discussing something you care about.
Your projection is quite good, currently at a level 6. Pushing that to a 7 could make your performance even more compelling. You handled the minor slip on the word "pocket" very well, quickly recovering without letting it disrupt your flow—well done on that. Overall, this was a solid performance, and with a bit more passion and energy consistency, I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue to improve in future reads.