Equestria Noir Radioplay: "The Big Macintosh Case"
RedhotVA for Private Eye
This is Private Eye, the troubled, sometimes snarky but we'll meaning private detective.
also be warned, this story is told from HIS perspective for the most part, so this makes him the narrator for most scenes. Don't worry though later stories has the perspective of other main characters.
but this alone makes Private Eye the most crucial voice to get right
I never much liked the rain. I always felt it gave Manehatten this sort of eerie feel that I can’t stand. I was not looking forward to the fact I’d have to be walking home in this torrential downpour so late at night. Maybe I should sue the Pegasus Weather Company for creating this storm. Ah well, I can barely afford to pay the rent, let alone hire a lawyer. I sighed and turned away from the window and turned to the papers before me. Yet another huge pile of bills I’d have to worry about if I don’t get a case soon.
“Ponyville? That’s in the middle of nowhere! Why should I leave good ole Manehatten for a job in Hicksville?”
I stopped short. “Wait. You just said…We...”
Much better! i like it more already. good job with fixing the "we" that had been bugging me as its literally the last word of a chapter! XD over all, i think this could work! how good is your Big Mac?
I'd say it's pretty decent
ive put him as a role too, so if you wanna try him, that be appreciated! i weighing options here