I like this a lot! You have the emotion, just not the right emotion. For line 1, picture the only person you've ever cared about in your life wanting so badly to chase a goal which takes them away from you, and trying to tell you not to go with them. For the second line, that same person is long gone, you've lost them, and someone says to you, "Why are you chasing her?" You love this woman, She's the most important thing in your life, and you would... For the third line, a strange woman has offered you a weapon, which she says is powerful enough to help you. Your character is always very polite, and soft. She hasn't asked for anything in return. Please try this one again, I think you can do it.