The first half doesn't have enough rasp, but as it goes on it fluctuates between raspy and not raspy. Not a bad thing, because not all ghouls have a heavy rasp, but it's just not what I'm looking for. I do apologize. I love the voice you use, though! If you audition for other roles, I will definitely consider you!
This is part of the process so no hard feelings. A big thank you for the opportunity. Sadly I don't have enough time to put in another audition. Best of luck with the project.