Mr. Music [Vocaloid Chorus]
fujoshihime for Len
Nantonaku nagai mono ni makareteChotto zutsu surihette'ku kibou mo
You've got a loud voice for sure, but you are pronouncing each sound strongly, which is something I'm not quite looking for. I think something to work on is which sounds to soften and which sounds to make stronger. It's harder to explain in words but looking up covers of the song will help you a lot. Since this is one of the mid earlier vocaloid songs and they had yet to really tack on that strong v soft sound of singing.
It's like what I'm saying is you're trying to sing this to someone you've got a crush on or trying to serenade someone. You gotta go with the flow and make it smooth and not every sound pronounced strongly.
Thank you so much for the feedback and I'm so sorry for the late reply, I haven't been able to come on here for a while due to business irl. I will attempt to resubmit if time permits, thanks again n.n