Kay so love your voice butttt here's the thing Kay so this is my comment -the first sentence of you fist audition perfect -your voice like the character (pretty chill) -sometimes your voice squeak -second and third line close to perfect (plz listen to Jenny' second and third line that is the closest expression of voice that very close for the thing that I want .if you could try copy that expression but with you voice that would be perfect for now!!!) it is your choice to audition again it's your choice.:)))