Yes, very good pace and happy energy. You're right, a lot of this will balance out with practice, so while its good to be aware of it, you're doing well and some of what distracts and detracts at present will fade and fall away with more practice. Great self listening and appreciation for the good diversity of expression, keeping it fresh and interesting. One of the hard aspects is sounding like you aer talking TO someone who isn't there but it will keep getting better with the trying.