Not bad, not bad at all. It's not what I'm looking for, unfortunately, but I do quite enjoy the silent solemness you give it - which is what I'm looking for. I don't know. Your audition struck an oxymoron in my mind. You gave it the right tone, but the voice itself is just not what I seek. I'm very sorry.
No worries. Thank you so much for your critique! I do hope you discover the perfect fit for your enamoring story!