Not bad, not bad at all. I feel as though you could give it some more solemness though. Some more emotion by way of a veil of adept forlorn silence, if that makes any sense? I know it probably doesn't, but that's the best way for me to describe it.
Not bad, not bad at all. I feel as though you could give it some more solemness though. Some more emotion by way of a veil of adept forlorn silence, if that makes any sense? I know it probably doesn't, but that's the best way for me to describe it.
The Narrator is the main voice of the fanfic. Having the sole purpose of reading the main fic aloud for the audience to hear and visualize. You will be the face of the fanfic. Sparking emotion with your vocals and your tone, and even from your own emotion. Read well!
I'm the Narrator. I have come to tell you this story of a stark soul that has fallen from grace. Hear me, and prepare to not cry as we find ourselves reading the story of a poor unfortunate that has fallen in the world we call by various names.