Thank you all, and truly sorry. -Canceled- {the two brothers prophecy}
Leegan for Sandthoat
a short-haired, cream and brown, classic-tabby tom, with dark eyes.
Deputy of Sun Clan.
- english
- male senior
- general
(Determined, assuring) "Don't worry everyone, Larkstar is getting ready for the battle with Stoneclan"
(Grateful) "Thank you kits, now come along. Let me tell a story."
(Pain, Feirce) "Larkstar watch out!!... Huh- Aaaaaagh!!!!"
Your voice is good for the characters, but it needs a bit of improvement like adding more reaction to it or like making the viewers excited. Love the voice but need like Sandthroat is very determined and is proud. Just try and maybe add a few changes that will make the viewers excited and wanting to know more. Still love the voice of yours. Keep trying, you got this!!
Sincerely, Tiger!
Hi, thank you for the feedback I really appreciate it I have had another go at sandthroat, let me know if you think I should have another go at any other roles, thanks