VA201 (Brendan - Nov 2023) - Session 2
Chloe O for Role
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
Great job, Chloe! I could hear you smiling all over, which is great. I felt the excitement. You could experiment with slowing down in the first 10 seconds or so. Great job!
Thank you so much, Brian! Slowing down is definitely a good idea, especially when there are tons of R's at the beginning (which I struggle with, always).
Thanks! Scream this? Ha ok that would be a big energy version. "GO TO THE JOB FAIR!!" This was helpful and pleasant. A warm and positive voice, beaming and kind. A good balance of professionalism and naturalness. Very well timed out to. You'd have made the <30s time slot comfortable for the editor. Well done.
Thank you so much, Brendan! I shall try one where I scream this, haha!