Nice take, Itsekava! I loved your verbal self critique! It was nice to hear your honest feedback on yourself! For the commercial, give yourself some more time on this and take moments to breath. That will help with some articulation along with the speed. Also, play around with finding a variety of colors to assign to different words/phrases.

I think you had a good read! It was nice to listen to ^.^

Thanks :) Nice power and some smile voice. You have a positive and helpful approach. I think this was a great example of when you're talking AT the mic. So normal. You go over it very well in your self critique, and I think you'll bring so much of your wonderful naturalness into your reads when you have the 'you'/them defined or instinctive/organic more. This is well represented in your spontaneous answers to the questions. Natural and adapting. The rehearsals are integral. PLAY! and try a bunch of ways until you really like what its making you imagine/feel for a way that this COULD go. Thanks for this :)