This was absolutely a bright reading omg. I personally think the pacing was amazing, as each word was clear and flowed properly. Also the ending was so good!! The change in tone definitely kept it from falling flat. Great job!!

Great excitement in your voice, Squirtle! Don't worry about the articulation, all that came out clear! I'd experiment with finding that excitement you had at the beginning and holding on to that energy till the end. Great job!

Thank you, this is very "good enough" at least :) Articulation and pace are both appropriate and your positive delivery shines through. You're really showing us a lot of your helpful and varied expression in here. Well done.